Peer Review P3

Cinthya Rivera reviewed my Shrek draft. Cinthya provided valuable and honest feedback. Cinthya’s primary recommendation to me was to extend includes my conclusion.  In question number four of the peer review rubric,” Where in the essay could the author better develop his or her ideas by using examples, giving more details, or quoting directly from the film or class notes on the theoretical model? Regarding this question, Cinthya asked me if the traditional beliefs mentioned in paragraph three were beliefs in the Robin Hood era or traditional beliefs in modern society? My Robin Hood singing statement “But I’m not greedy. I rescue pretty damsels, man I am good”. There is a little doubt that he believes that all pretty women are helpless and need a hero to save them from the world.  In response to Cinthya’s question, I believe that American women take equality for granted but women in other cultures are still fighting for those rights.  Currently, many women prefer to be treated as objects as reflected in magazine covers with scantily clad women. After additional consideration of Cinthya’s question, I am certain that these traditional beliefs still exist in modern society.